Friday, February 15, 2008

Diana Abu Jaber


Diana Abu Jaber is one author who I return to again and again. Abu Jaber grew up listening to stories told by her Jordanian immigrant father and his influence is clear in terms of what she writes about, the style of her language, and the form her stories take. Her writing ends up being more like oral story telling than written prose. Her descriptions are vibrant and her characters well-developed. Below is an excerpt from my favorite book of hers: Crescent

The sky is white.

The sky shouldn't be white because it's after midnight and the moon has not yet appeared and nothing is as black and as ancient as the night in Baghdad. It is dark and fragrant as the hanging gardens of the extinct city of Chaldea, as dark and still as the night in the uppermost chamber of the spiraling Tower of Babel.

But it's white because white is the color of an exploding rocket. The ones that come from over the river, across the fields, from the other side of an invisible border, from another ancient country called Iran. The rockets are so close sometimes he can hear the warning whisk before they explode. The ones that explode in the sky send off big round blooms of colors, pinwheels of fire. But the ones that explode on the ground erase everything: they send out streamers of fire that race across the ground like electric snakes; they light up the donkeys by the water troughs and make their shadows a hundred meters long. They light up every blade of grass, every lizard, and every date; they electrify the dozing palms and set the most distant mountains-the place his uncle calls the Land of Na-on fire. They make his sister's face glow like yellow blossoms, they make the water look like phosphorescence as it runs from the tap. Their report sizzles along the tops of the tallest western buildings and rings against the minarets and domes. They whistle through the orchards and blast acres of olive trees out of the ground. They light up the Euphrates River, knock down the walls of the old churches, the ancient synagogues, the mysterious, crumbling monuments older than the books, monuments to gods so old they've lost their names, the ancient walls dissolving under the shock waves like dust.

1 comment:

Me, Myself, and I said...

War described with flowing phrasing is done superbly.

"They make his sister's face glow like yellow blossoms, they make the water look like phosphorescence as it runs from the tap."

The phrase is elegant to contrast further with the topic and produces a pensive quality.